Letting it Out | Short Story

*Contains swearing*

It feels as though a lot is expected of me today. Strange, because there is really nothing left unresolved. The coffin awaiting its descent into the frosty ground is testament to that. It lies there, a timber cuboid. The ultimate full stop.

What then, is there left for me to say? What is left to commentate upon? I’ve no doubt my lack of words is being explained away behind hands and between murmuring lips. They’ll say it’s numbness. Maybe they’ll say that I’m drunk as usual. Who gives a fuck what they say?

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The morning has assumed an unreal quality. I feel as though the scene is captured by one of those time-lapse cameras. Clouds scud across the wintery sky at implausible speed, whilst the yews lining the cemetery bow and raise their bristled heads in time with the rhythm of the wheeling, watery sun. Friends and family are doing odd things with their hands. They clasp them in the manner of someone who should be holding a flat cap or lace them behind their backs as though pondering the great mystery of life. When they are not doing either of these things, they offer weak, dry handshakes to me over my father’s grave, as though fearful that prolonged contact might result in them catching my addiction.

It is difficult not to replace the bland words coming from their mouths with other more suited to their expressions. Many, if not most, believe that I drove my father to his death. My habit consumed his money, his marriage, and finally his health, they would like to say. They are not far wrong. My problem is social convention. It dictates that I should wail and sob. At the least I should sniffle. That would grant me enough good will from the mourners to get me to the end of the service. I can find nothing to work with.

Something is expected of me. People are staring. The undertakers are preparing to lower the coffin into the ground on clean, white ropes. I put my hand on the pine. Still not enough. A kiss? A kiss on the top of the coffin? With a dramatic pause before I rise? Who says regular drinking isn’t good for cognitive ability?

My hand slides over the brass plaque and onto the wood. A splinter jags into my palm but pain cannot take away from this performance. Now for the finale. I press my forehead against where I imagine Dad’s noggin to be and scrunch my eyes up for effect. I breathe deeply, half expecting to smell formaldehyde or whatever it is they use to preserve the body.

All I get is the smell of freshly dug soil. Nothing nauseating about that. It is a smell that reminds me of football boots getting laced by the side of a pitch on a Sunday morning, of shin pads that were too big for me, and of Dad stalking up and down the touchline and barking at me to get stuck in lad. It strikes me that no-one ever really got anything out of those Sundays. I was certainly never making it as a pro, and my dad can’t have been delighted at having to cut short his Saturday drinking to get up at God-only-knows what hour to drive me to some windswept pitch in the arse end of nowhere and to pick me up after another shite game and to sit me down on the back seat on a towel and to tell me that the coach had me playing in the wrong position and that the man had no bloody football brain anyway.

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There are hands on my shoulders. I realise that my sight has gone blurry. Comforting snippets cluster around my ears – phrases like ‘Let it out, lad’, and ‘You know he loved you, don’t you?’. I let myself be pulled back, supported as I am enveloped by well-wishers and aunts with handkerchiefs.

As Dad is lowered down into the ground, I reflect that this is better. This is how a funeral should be. Thank goodness for the football memory. How much longer that will be good for I don’t know but it has never failed me yet when I need to put on a show.

Now, don’t these wakes usually come with a free bar?

*Thanks for reading, folks. Images courtesy of Jonathan Clitheroe and George Armstrong.*

 



Matthew Richardson is a writer of short stories. His work has featured in Gold Dust magazine, Literally Stories, Near to the Knuckle, McStorytellers, Penny Shorts, Soft Cartel, Whatever Keeps the Lights On, and Shooter magazine. He is an absentee member of the Glasgow Writers Group, a PhD student at the University of Dundee, a lucky husband, and a proud father.

Not necessarily in that order

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14 thoughts on “Letting it Out | Short Story

  1. Weird what is expected of the grief stricken, when mourning is the most personal of experiences. However, there is definitely something slightly amiss with your narrator. A sociopathic personality, perhaps? Great writing and as Tom says, immersive.

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    1. Yeah I think definite elements of sociopathy there! Was originally going for a redemptive ending but it felt a bit twee. Hence the horrible narrator we have now 😂 Thanks so much for reading Lynn as ever and for your kind words.

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    1. “Write what you know,” Matthew? I doubt it. The woman shuffling through Westminster Abbey, who lingers in my mind—and now this cold, calculating guy. I think you have a remarkable ability to breathe life into these offbeat characters, making them seem both consistent and surprising. The shoe image lent the note of pathos that you seeded into your narrator—despite it all.

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      1. Thanks so much Annie! On reflection I do seem to have moved away from that particular piece of writing advice somewhat 😂 Either that or I’m undergoing quite a dramatic personality shift!

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  2. Dear Mathew, The story is reminiscent of Franz Kafka. Every thing is so bleak in the story, even nature. The character portrayal is so remarkable. and you have carried their quixotic eccentricities so well. The humor is so ironic. Anand Bose from Kerala

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  3. Oof. So real it hurts. But there’s something so wonderful about you swearing in your writing. Makes me truly happy inside and now I can smile for the rest of the day. Thanks Matthew 😉
    Also loved your content warning method. Might snag that if I may. 🙏

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    1. Thanks Nadine. Snag away by all means! I can certainly use more bad language should the occasion call for it-there’s no shortage 😂 I’m still really struggling to get on your blog btw. Every time I try it tells me that it is now private and that I need to request permission. 😢

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      1. 😄 I hope you do know that I’m teasing a little… you’re a brilliant storyteller with or without the swearing. Loving the comments from the others which sum things up perfectly. About my blog, I’m having a bit of a hard time of things, not least of all technologically, it seems. 😥 I’m completely locked out of my computer; this has never happened before. Feeling kind of vulnerable and unsure of things, so made my blog private again for now. Hoped to be back running again yesterday but that didn’t work out. In the meantime, very happy to read your work, and of course dreaming of daikus. 😉👐😊

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