We’re basking in a stilled, hot summer today in a couple of haiku…

Heat
Peeling under heat –
a once-clad fence bare-wooded
to coming winters.

Hopscotch
Rain-faded hopscotch
and rust-stilled swings – a playground
in restless ennui.
Thanks for reading folks. Recent short stories include ‘Deposition‘ and ‘The Silver-Lined Ridge‘.
Matthew Richardson is a writer of short stories. His work has featured in Gold Dust magazine, Literally Stories, Close to the Bone, McStorytellers, Penny Shorts, Soft Cartel, Whatever Keeps the Lights On, Flashback Fiction, Cafelit, Best MicroFiction 2021, Writer’s Egg, Idle Ink, The Wild Word, Down in the Dirt, and Shooter magazine. He

Both are brill, Matthew. I can almost feel that warmth!
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Thanks Chris. There’s something about a set of swings in the heat that’s very atmospheric!
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Well done, Matthew, as always. The juxtaposition in the third line of each haiku is strong. I usually have a favorite of your two micro poem offerings, but today it’s too close to call. I favor them both.
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Two more winners, Matthew. I found the alliteration and movement of “rust-stilled swings…restless ennui” especially pleasing.
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Thanks Annie. Some nice weather over here for a change!
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That’s only fair, Matthew!
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love ‘restless ennui’ —
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Thanks John.
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Hopscotch – wonderfully eerie. Nearby a sandbox empty – except for the muted Mr. Potato who calls out for rescue. Alas he has no mouth. ; P
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I hadn’t thought of hopscotch in ages. Never expected to encounter it in a poem. I’m glad I did.
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It certainly took me back as well!
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