Beginnings in the crags, where the mist skeins slide over rubbled morain, where the clouds purple and brood. The water is nowhere and everywhere, tinkling and spidered under the stones, the little rivulets caught between plains of sky and scree.
A gathering, fog-borne and trembling upon mountain frond. The soil, suddenly rain-choked, heaves its burden downhill, down the mountain and into the water-worn channels, veined in the thin soil. The gathering gathers, guttering unseen in the high places, licking the smoother rocks and gaining pace, a frigid churn and the first tentative
drops. Gurgling now, and tufted grass overhanging the foam-flecked vertices, those perma-shadowed dirt-and-stone walls.
Leaps now, and foam hangs light in the thickening air, plunging into the bubbling pools, churning in the wind-stirred water.
Calmer now, winding through the sheep pasture, no sign of the still-strong currents other than the guttering suck of undercut banks, the wobbled eddies on the surface.
Dropping
into a land of sweeping curves and manicured oxbow lakes, of damp-legged jetties and beer gardens festooned with warm pint glasses winking in the sun, of the well-to-do messing about in boats and leaf-dappled lawns sloping down to the drink. Staid, now, a tamed bolt against a verdant green.
On, and darkening into the post-industrial hinterlands. A littering of rusted wharfs and gaping outflow pipes, of river waders fluting on upturned, bed-bound hulls, of brick warehouses leering over the water with black, gaping windows.
Wider, now. So wide that the cold churn of the mountains is nothing but memory, its kinetic energy smeared across floodplains in jaded sweeps.
Down
through the dunes and onto the sand, a creeping rush of fresh-meets-saltwater. Sun on the dipping waves and, on the horizon, the first plumes of a cloudbank seeking the mountaintops.
*Thanks for reading, folks. Images courtesy of Vittorio Staffolani and Rakhee. My recent short stories include ‘The Young Man from Number Twenty-Seven’ and ‘Plausible Deniability‘.
Matthew Richardson is a writer of short stories. His work has featured in Gold Dust magazine, Literally Stories, Close to the Bone, McStorytellers, Penny Shorts, Soft Cartel, Whatever Keeps the Lights On, Flashback Fiction, Cafelit, Best MicroFiction 2021, Writer’s Egg, Idle Ink, The Wild Word, and Shooter magazine. He is a doctoral student at the University of Dundee, a lucky husband, and a proud father. He blogs at www.matthewjrichardson.com.
I am amused by this notion of where a river begins – there was a programme on source of the Thames a while ago – here you describe a seamless transition from cloud to trickle with no decernable transition. For me that’s a little nearer the truth.
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Yes I think there’s a longer piece in there about that condensing process that starts off what we see as discernable water flow for sure
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So beautifully penned My Friend.
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Cheers Goff as always.
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love these sharp-eyed, tender observations, Matthew, the quotidian and the strange ; loved those ‘warm pint glasses winking in the sun’ —
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I was thinking of a lovely lazy afternoon in a beer garden. Cheers John
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Fantastic piece, Matthew! It reminds me of that old Deacon Blue song, ‘One Day I’ll Go Walking’. It’s about water’s journey from trickle to burn to waves.
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Just played this on YouTube as it’s been ages since I heard it!
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My brain likes to play it randomly between Slipknot and the Pinky and The Brain theme tune.
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Such a lovely journey you’ve taken us on, Matthew–with your creative text placement and photos
further enhancing word pictures that would be stunning even without them. More, please!
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Thanks Annie – I enjoyed writing this one.
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