Morning folks,
my latest piece of flash fiction, ‘Vengeance is Mine’, is up online courtesy of Close to the Bone fiction. It’s pretty dark and I’d love to hear your feedback!
http://www.close2thebone.co.uk/wp/?p=4673
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I am not bemused 😛 You used that word quite a lot in the beginning. Did you do that on purpose? I feel for the protagonist. You’ve conveyed his emotional state like a prose virtuoso.
Yeah I wanted the criminal to attempt to come across as pretending to be bewildered with the legal process. Thanks as always for your kind words!
Aw man, I thought you were poking fun at something with that 🙂 I guess I tend to overthink things.
Nah you just overestimated my intelligence!
I doubt that… Now I’m bemused!
I’d love to give you feedback but there was nothing wrong with it, so…
All I can offer is praise 😀
Thanks so much!