The house on the mountain. It was as good a name as any.
There was a path, such as it was, cutback atop cutback, gouged into the loose soil and the scree on the side of the rockface. The sun spooled out over the mountain face within which the house was crammed for only a few hours every day, fewer in winter. When the pale warmth hit the face, the ice thawed and rocks fell like teeth from blasted gums, hurtling down to threaten anyone foolish enough to be climbing. In the summer, meltwater eddied and gushed from on high, thrumming down and beating upon the weathered rock. What stone and stream did not deter, terrain made fools of. Air and wind yawned around the bare faces; only trembling wildflowers and feather-bustled birds were brave enough to cling on.
For the man, the house was not forbidding or lonely. It was a place to live in, to look out from. Instead of stone, the man saw the sun-blushed valley, the little village bustling and busy. Over the patchwork of pasture and conurbation, the shadow of the mountain brushed, proprietary and tender.
Thanks for reading folks. Recent short stories include ‘The Kinmount Straight‘ and ‘Shadow and Light‘.
Matthew Richardson is a writer of short stories. His work has featured in Gold Dust magazine, Literally Stories, Close to the Bone, McStorytellers, Penny Shorts, Soft Cartel, Whatever Keeps the Lights On, Flashback Fiction, Cafelit, Best MicroFiction 2021, Writer’s Egg, Idle Ink, The Wild Word, Down in the Dirt, and Shooter magazine. He has a Professional Doctorate in Education. Matthew blogs at www.matthewjrichardson.com.
Beautiful prose, and a nice metaphor going on here, I feel.
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Thanks so much Chris. Really appreciated as always.
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Pleasure to read.
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How lovely, Matthew! This guy seems happy, and that’s good. Bet he’s a writer!
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I’d like to think so. Far worse places he could be writing from!
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This is the kind of guy I want to be: part of the world, but a safe distance away from the hustle and bustle. The home owner in your story sounds like a real Thoreau type; instead of on golden pond, he’s on golden mountain.
Well done, Matthew.
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I’m the same David. Part of the bustle but not of the bustle…
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love that last stanza, Matthew: it nails it ! great picture —
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Thanks John. Very much appreciated as always.
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I love the description of the valley and village below awesome stuff.
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Thanks so much, Christopher.
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